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J the nomad gangster
1 year Il y a  ::  Mar 24, 2012 - 9:00AM #1
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My name is.....well thats not very important you can just call me J this is my shameful story.
PROLOGUE:
I wasn't always in the saints. I used to be a Vice King. I was there when Julius saved the person who would later become the leader of the saints. You may be thinking didn't the Vice Kings around all get gunned down by Julius, Troy, and the other gangsters? Yes and no I was hiding in a dumpster I knew somthing was about to go down. I quickly jumped in a near by dumpster and hid. After the chaos stopped I quickly jumped out and ran as far as I could. I finally came to a stop behind a clothes store. As I panted I thought I could use some new threads. With a smirk I took off my clothes and threw it into a dumpster. I walked in just wearing my bra and panties. I looked through all the clothes as everyone gawked. I walked to the counter with my new rounded shades, yellow skirt and yellow track jacket.
Store clerk: "That will be $250"
J: (Reachs in bra pulling out a crumpled up 100 dollar bill) "Dammit I just brought some money for food." (looks at young beautiful clerk girl) "Hmmmmmm is there any other way I could pay you?"
Unfortuneatley she didn't swing the way I did if you get what im saying *giggles* well anyway I punched her in the face and ran. Now that I think about it was a shame to mess up such a beautiful face. I ran all the way home I could hear the sirens behind me. I got home opened my beer and saw what was on TV. Nothing but porn, cartoons, and News. I switched on the News. What I saw gave me a heart attack. I was the first thing that came on but before they showed the clip of me Breaking news came up. There was a gang war in the streets Vice Kings, Third Street Saints, Los Carnales, Westside Rollers, and the police of Stilwater. I needed to help my friends.[To be continued]

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1 year Il y a  ::  Mar 24, 2012 - 5:25PM #2
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So this one takes place during Saints row 1? Nice. Some tips. Space your paragraphs and always space after somebody is talking. Helps us read it a lot easier. Cool

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