You ever hear of the term "Completely destroyed" before? Ya you just did that dude...
Quite frankly that all sounds like the mass effect 3 ending to me only in the saint style. You know how much I hated that ending?
You had a good thing but you just completely wrecked it with that post.
My opinion anyways. This is from multiple things as well and not one thing in that post. I was going to post a chapter to Quartet today but now quite frankly I think I won't.
I know Writer's re-lapse is a bitch we all go through it when writing/typing. It's knowing the end is near that makes you not want to finish it because then people expect more from you.