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1 year ago ::
Nov 25, 2011 - 9:29AM
#11
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Hey Marik, if Desmond isn't a Saint anymore, then its possible the he and Dean will be able to be on the same side of a fight. By the way, right now, as I'm typing this, you have 666 posts. As an Iron Maiden fan, that rocks my world =D
Oh, when does the IC thread go up?
Well first I need to type up a opening post. Yes as well that Dean and Desmond could be on the same side. Dean would be happy that Desmond is no longer in a gang. Oh no… now it’s 667. Happy to ruin your dreams!
Marik Ishtar- I'm sorry, I can't hear you over the screaming fan-girls.
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1 year ago ::
Nov 25, 2011 - 10:18AM
#12
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hey Marik how did i scare you with my writing level and what i do wrong
Why are you reading this? You curious stop reading this. This is your last warning man Alright I've had it. FUS RO DAH
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1 year ago ::
Nov 25, 2011 - 10:58AM
#13
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This one is for you guys to approve. Oh and just so you know, Adam Dearg didn't exist, it was a man trying to kill Desmond Wright. Name: Andrew Dearg Age: 24 Sex: Male Height: 8'6" Weight: 349lb, 318lb of his weight is muscle, Blood Type: AB+ Hair Color/Style: Sarge, jet black. Eye Color: Light Blue Likes: Money, destroying things, women Dislikes: Annoying people, people who disrespect him Gang/Gang Style: He runs by himself and four Oleg clones. Clothing: Black tank top, black basic jeans, black ultras. Biography: Shane Dearg was this giant's brother. He was willing to destroy anything that pisses him off, the Saints are doing just that. They have been taking out some of his Oleg friends, now he has four, he used to have ten, that is until the Saints decided to attack them. He never really cared for people that start ****. He is willing to join any force that will help him destroy violence and gangs. He knows of another person with the same colored eyes as his brother. He looks for him so they can work together and destroy the madness that is describing Steelport.
Troll Gamer: "You suck."
Me: "WHAT? I CANT HEAR YOU DOWN AT THE BOTTOM OF THE SCOREBOARD! BUT IF YOU CAN HEAR ME, THEN GET SKILLS!"
*Everyone In The Lobby With A Mic Starts To Crack Up*
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1 year ago ::
Nov 25, 2011 - 11:43AM
#14
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Well I hate to say this Spriggs, but I am a grammar Nazi. Let me show you. This was what you wrote.
hey Marik how did i scare you with my writing level and what i do wrong
Now, let’s start with the start of your sentence. You need to capitalize the hey. I don’t think I need to go into why you need to do that though. The fifth word I also needs to be capitalized. This of course also goes along with your fourteenth word, which is also an I. Every I needs to be capitalized when by itself. Also going back to the start of your sentence, there needs to be a comma in between Marik and how. It cleans up the sentence, making it better to read. After level there should be a question mark to explain your asking a question as well. That’s when you take out the and, and capitalize the what. Next, “What I do wrong?” This should be worded as “What did I do wrong?”. When It’s all said and done, it should look something like this.
Hey Marik, how did I scare you with my writing level? What did I do wrong?
Marik Ishtar- I'm sorry, I can't hear you over the screaming fan-girls.
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1 year ago ::
Nov 25, 2011 - 11:45AM
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8'6"?!?! Holy ****! That guy's a monster. Still, I think Des could take him. And yeah Marik, you ruined my dreams, making your 667th post >.< Jerk. Haha, nah, you would have had to post again eventually. You know... to start the RP...
Desmond's Story: http://saintsrow.com/community/go/thread/view/136777/28590629/Desmond_Wright:_Four_Leaf_Clover
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1 year ago ::
Nov 25, 2011 - 11:56AM
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Hahaha, good luck to him. I just fixed my intros up for the RP I am good to go.
Troll Gamer: "You suck."
Me: "WHAT? I CANT HEAR YOU DOWN AT THE BOTTOM OF THE SCOREBOARD! BUT IF YOU CAN HEAR ME, THEN GET SKILLS!"
*Everyone In The Lobby With A Mic Starts To Crack Up*
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1 year ago ::
Nov 25, 2011 - 12:46PM
#17
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Wait… Where are you from? It might just be you don’t speak English and the translation is crappy. Sorry then. But how do you post? I don’t quite understand this part…. If everyone did every one won't be human.
Marik Ishtar- I'm sorry, I can't hear you over the screaming fan-girls.
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1 year ago ::
Nov 25, 2011 - 2:39PM
#18
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Im from africa but I travle around a lot from time to time hearing different accents from different people
Why are you reading this? You curious stop reading this. This is your last warning man Alright I've had it. FUS RO DAH
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1 year ago ::
Nov 25, 2011 - 2:44PM
#19
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That explains everything.
Troll Gamer: "You suck."
Me: "WHAT? I CANT HEAR YOU DOWN AT THE BOTTOM OF THE SCOREBOARD! BUT IF YOU CAN HEAR ME, THEN GET SKILLS!"
*Everyone In The Lobby With A Mic Starts To Crack Up*
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1 year ago ::
Nov 25, 2011 - 3:04PM
#20
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Troll Gamer: "You suck."
Me: "WHAT? I CANT HEAR YOU DOWN AT THE BOTTOM OF THE SCOREBOARD! BUT IF YOU CAN HEAR ME, THEN GET SKILLS!"
*Everyone In The Lobby With A Mic Starts To Crack Up*
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