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3 years ago  ::  Nov 05, 2011 - 11:30PM #1
OGluke
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                                                                                                  My best girl




- The Story -

While taking over steelport, shaundi somehow manages to get kidnapped by the morningstar and It's up to the saints to stop them from auctioning off shaundi and save her before she's sold into a life of slavery.  (this story takes cues from the movie taken, so if you've never watch it, you should but still you might be able to enjoy the story even if you havent seen it.



Yours to keep pt1.


City of Steelport,
Neighborhood: In Trinton


- The Saints -
The Player
Johnny Gat
Pierce
Angel
Zimos

*The saints are stationed outside the vroom auto club, waiting for the players orders*


{the club itself is property of the syndicate but its owners are the dewynter twins}


Johnny Gat: So whats the plan of the day?


Player: There is none. We're marching in there and shooting every mother**** thats standing.


Johnny Gat: The morningstar got it coming.


Pierce: The Morningstar? Since when did we take to killing strippers?


Player: Pierce, you haven't been in steelport long but incase your woundering.. the morningstar are a bunch of european scumbags who've kidnapped shaundi and we're about to go kill every last one of them or die trying to get her back.


Pierce: ... if thats the case, we aint got much time.


Player: Why not?


Pierce: The european scumbags as you like to call them, are known to force their captives into prostitution, but with shaundi theres no telling what their motives will be.


Angel: That poses as a problem for shaundi.


Zimos: Yeah, because shes one fine ass bitch. If i could i'd had put some spinners on that hoe.


Player: Shut up zimos. You were saying?


Pierce: I dont know if i should be telling you this, besides i dont want you freaking out on me.


Player: How bad could it be?


Pierce: Remember you asked. Before arriving in steelport, i did a background check on our enemy and according to the nasty gossip ive read online, the morningstar does infact run a prostitution ring here in the city, but the least of our worries is they only go after women.


Player: And what does that make shaundi? Get on with it.


Pierce: The women that are picked up well, the ugly ones you already know about, as for shaundi, she was most likely taken somewhere underground and is about to be sold off as a slave to another country. Im sorry, but thems the cold hard facts.


Angel: The slavery part, sounds awful.


Player: *grabs pierce* WHY THE **** DIDNT YOU TELL ME THAT BEFORE!?


pierce: How was i supposed to know that you didnt already know!?


Player: You acted like you didnt know who the **** they were, yet you knew all along and now shaundis about to be sold to ****ing terrorists all because you forgot to inform us of your research!


Pierce: What makes you think it'll be the middle-east?


*player punches pierce in the face*


Johnny Gat: Relax man, we'll get her back and then make those ****uckers pay.


Player: *stands pierce up* sorry i hit you.


Pierce: Most people would probably say i deserved that, but right now our main priority is rescuing shaundi.


 Player: Your right. Everybody grab what equpment you can carry, we're moving now.


Johnny Gat: Cant leave home without a rocket-launcher. Lets burn some rubber.


- behind closed doors -

?: *looks inside the glass booth* I'm in need of a new bride, perhaps you are what im looking for.. although i'd have those digusting tattoos removed and that color washed off your body. I'm not fond of purple.


Shaundi: *screams* Your dead ****, all of you are dead!


[The glass booth is soundproof]


?: I do not have the power to read lips.


?: Do you like what we have on display, mr ripley?


Mr. Ripley: Indeed.. such a fine specimen. Where did you find her?


?: In west minster. In the time of her capture she had already murdered half of our men.


Mr. Ripley: Whats her name?


?: It's shaundi.


Mr. Ripley: *looks at shaundi* A trashy title, with a great asset.


?: I couldn't agree with you more. Theres alotta junk in that trunk.


Mr. Ripley: What else exhibits do you have?


?: I dont blame you for passing man, this woman is total complete garbage, now, if you'll just follow me i'll introduce you to some models.


Mr. Ripley: Nothing is wrong with, whats her name, she is well qualified but not exactly what i had in mind when i came down here, in otherwords.. where do you keep the blondes?


?: Now your speaking my language, right this way.


Shaundi: I'll feed you your own ****ing **** for supper if you dont let me out of here!!!


Mr. Ripley: *taps on glass* I'll keep you in mind aswell.

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3 years ago  ::  Nov 06, 2011 - 3:31AM #2
Amaris
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Lol, very nice! XD 

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Check out Shaundi's Side in the Steelport Stories section, you'll love it!
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3 years ago  ::  Nov 06, 2011 - 3:45AM #3
OGluke
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Nov 6, 2011 -- 3:31AM, Amaris wrote:

Lol, very nice! XD 






thank you amaris

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3 years ago  ::  Nov 06, 2011 - 2:55PM #4
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Hahahah! Your stories always make me feel warm and fuzzy inside! I need more good sir!

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3 years ago  ::  Nov 06, 2011 - 7:16PM #5
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Nov 6, 2011 -- 2:55PM, Wetbizket wrote:


Hahahah! Your stories always make me feel warm and fuzzy inside! I need more good sir!





warm n fuzzy like a teddybear playa


 thanks for liking

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3 years ago  ::  Nov 09, 2011 - 1:57AM #6
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to whom it may concern


ive rewritten the story and made it more enjoyable for your viewing pleasure.

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3 years ago  ::  Nov 09, 2011 - 9:10AM #7
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EVEN BETTER!

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3 years ago  ::  Nov 09, 2011 - 10:09AM #8
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Nov 9, 2011 -- 9:10AM, Wetbizket wrote:


EVEN BETTER!





you watched the movie? theyre always showing it on FX and thanks man, i knew i could count on you :)

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3 years ago  ::  Nov 21, 2011 - 8:09AM #9
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Awesome.When are you making more???

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