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The Stillwater Earthquake
3 years ago  ::  Aug 19, 2011 - 11:34PM #11
OGluke
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V never did go in-depth with what happend during the earthquake, that story needed to be told

thankyou eazknight

the stories good.
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3 years ago  ::  Aug 20, 2011 - 4:29AM #12
funkysaint
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nice story keep it up
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3 years ago  ::  Aug 20, 2011 - 6:57AM #13
theaznknight1
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Thanks everyone
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3 years ago  ::  Aug 20, 2011 - 11:22AM #14
DRooks24
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Durning all the commotion, John should "make a come up" by robbing the bank.(LOL)
Its really great bro, keep it up.
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3 years ago  ::  Aug 20, 2011 - 7:17PM #15
theaznknight1
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Chapter 2        1:02-1:19 pm

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Smashing through the streets down the roads, down the ally ways.

The Engine was burning from all this driving. A large building pounded the ground over forming a ramp like object. John had no time to brake, so he hit the gas and heard a big pop from the car just as the car went over the ramped building. It turns out there was a gigantic gap over the ramp. High up in the air he screamed "OH SHIT." Ahead of the landing stood an apartment building slanted because of the earthquake. Everything was falling beneath the ground. The beaten, destroyed Ethel smashed right into the apartment building. Tons of dust and wood pounded on top of the Ethel. "AAHHHHH!" John screamed. Since the apartment was slanted he was rolling down it. The windshield broke, glass falling out.  Shaking more than ever the another building toppled over one another trapping the soldier under ground. Bruised, bloody, he could not move,  a large rocky object was blocking his only exit, the windshield. All he wanted was a good life but instead he got this. A sharp pain destroyed his left leg, he was losing a lot blood in that leg."Stay calm john, stay calm i will  get out of this." Sadly he knew he wouldn't. Using all of his strength he punched the rock once twice thrice. He passed out......  "GET READY MEN!" "MOVE MOVE M". A bullet striked Sergant Bradshaw once those doors opened. Bullets flying into soldiers. The allies returned fire with there guns........... "AHH" trapped in the car again he punched the rock  until he bled. Almost enough room to get out. Rogers had no space here, he pulled out his .45 sheperd and bashed at the steering wheel. He pulled it out. CRACK John pushed the rock out.Crawling out he saw the blood stains on his leg. He was surrounded by the ruined city now underground. There was a crack in the wall, he looked through all he could see was a broken fountain. No one could find him now. He shed a tear. John fired his .45 into the wall out of saddness and anger. His leg couldn't stand it so he found a dusty bed and rested on for a couple of minutes..........
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3 years ago  ::  Aug 20, 2011 - 6:27PM #16
DRooks24
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DAMN! John can't go out like that bro, he just can't. Man I'm feeling this story alot.
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3 years ago  ::  Aug 21, 2011 - 12:07PM #17
Wetbizket
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 This story is extream lol! Enjoying all of it so far! keep it rockn and a rollin!
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3 years ago  ::  Aug 25, 2011 - 10:17PM #18
theaznknight1
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I have been busy lately
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3 years ago  ::  Aug 31, 2011 - 7:56AM #19
theaznknight1
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OK so my life is really filled up and i barely have any forum time, so im gonna release CHAPTER 3 in parts. Sorry for not writing lately. And for my english, BTW im asian.

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Chapter 3 Part 1

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"Where am I ?" "What the hell is this?" "I can't feel my leg" He realized that he was still trapped, cut off from civilazation. The place was darker than usual. John looked around him, he noticed some dirt on the wall. It was soft so John could crawl through it. Barely fitting in he crawled for about 5ft. A wooden door blocked him. Pushing it open dirt and dust flew into his eyes. He grunted. John could barely see. The floor was slanted upward.
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3 years ago  ::  Sep 01, 2011 - 10:51AM #20
Wetbizket
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 it sucks you dont have much time to write this great story, but you gotta do what you gotta do! Keep it up!
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