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Breaking Benjamin
3 years ago  ::  Aug 01, 2011 - 10:11AM #1
OGluke
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NOTE: The Title of the story has nothing to do with the band, it's slang for robbing a bank.

*one day after "The Bigger Picture" www.saintsrow.com/forums/topic/48499

In Stilwater,
Wardill Airport

Phillipe Loren's plane arrives on schedule in wardill airport

Phillipe and his entourage step off the plane

Phillipe: I vaguely remember much from our last visit, but i do recall doing business with some of the locals in this area. Who were they?

Viola: It was the Brotherhood.

Phillipe: Thanks for reminding me.

Kiki: Their mechanic was cute. I should try looking him up.

Viola: Uh show some class kiki. We are here to conduct an experiment, not chase after garbage.

Phillipe: *observes his surroundings* The Brotherhood do not seem to be around anymore, i wounder what could have happen to them? *lights up cigarette*

Matt Miller: What is it we're here for again?

Phillipe: Dear boy, we are here to seek out the biggest and baddest criminal entity in stilwater, and than flip them *snaps fingers* for a fortune. *phone rings* Speak.

Morningstar Gangster: Sir, i think i have found what you are looking for.

Phillipe: Really? What is their name?

Morningstar Gangster: The Saints.

Phillipe: Who did you find this out from?

Morningstar Gangster: It was birk sir.

Phillipe: So you have found him at last! I was woundering where he had scampered off too.. all this time he was hiding out in this place. It would seem that this city is a haven for lost souls and remarkable discoveries. Wouldn't you agree?

Phillipe thinks to himself

Voila: Is something the matter?

Phillipe: Why did i not think of this before. What would you say to moving into stilwater? We could stick to our businesses and make some real progress but not before dealing with these uh...

Viola: Saints, sir?

Phillipe: Yes yes them. Once we've taken them out of the equation, we will use this city as a hub.

Viola: That idea is brilliant.

Kiki: I see a flaw in your plan.. if we are here, then whos going to run steelpor in our absence?

Phillipe: We would not be going anywhere kiki. This thought of mine will take some developing, and we will need to have rid the city of it's gang problem first. Afterwhich, we will transfer either you miller or you killbane, to keep a watchful eye over our investments. Think of it as a promotion.

Killbane: My boys could use a vacation, stilwater it is.

Miller: We haven't talked this over yet.

Killbane: What did i just say little boy!?

Miller: *backs down* Okay, it's yours.

Phillipe: Than it is settled. once our business has concluded, the luchadores will move in right away. Whoo knows, maybe there will be something in it for you and your deckers if we decide to do the same in tristar.
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3 years ago  ::  Aug 01, 2011 - 7:40AM #2
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Phillipe Loren continues to rant like a madman until receiving some disturbing news.

Morningstar Gangster: Sir, i hate to interrupt but josh has decided to stay with the saints.

Phillipe: That is not his decision to make. He has already sworn his allegiance to us. If he cannot adhere to the contract that he signed, then we will have to reeducate him.

Morningstar Gangster: Uh sir, the saints are entering hesperus.

Phillipe: My bank? Why would the saints be going into my bank? They are not members.. Find out what their real intentions are.

Morningstar Gangster: *goes up to the saints* Hey you, what are you.. oh shit.

A shotgun blast can be heard from the other side

Johnny Gat: Hand over the fucking money old lady!

Phillipe hears the alarm going off along with distant gunshots and screams over the phone

Phillipe: The saints are robbing me? But why are they robbing me? I intend on getting some answers. unload my car, no, unload all of the cars. We are going for a ride.

Matt Miller: Where we going?

Phillipe: Downtown to stop the rodents from stealing our cheese.

Killbane: Finally, a real battle! i cannot wait to break me some eggs!

Matt Miller: Eggs, Cheese, i dont get it.. are we going to punish the saints or make them an omelette?

Phillipe: Hurry it up. as for the rest of you standing around, get over to the bank and protect my money.

The Saints are unaware that Hesperus, the bank they are robbing, just so happens to belong to Phillipe Loren, the same man who wishes to capture and destroy them.
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3 years ago  ::  Aug 01, 2011 - 8:14AM #3
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3 years ago  ::  Aug 01, 2011 - 9:06AM #4
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Downtown,
Hesperus Bank

A Steelport helicoper flies around the banks parameters before opening fire on it.

Shaundi: Why the hell are they shooting at us!?

Johnny Gat: I dont know and i dont care, shoot that bitch down!

The saints turn their attention towards the helicopter

Shaundi: This isnt working johnny!

Johnny: Did anybody perchance bring a rocket launcher?

Saint: I got you covered. *hands johnny his rocket launcher*

Johnny: Fucking A.

Johnny lines up his shot and fires the rocket at the helicopter

Steelport Pilot: We're going down, brace for impact!

The Helicopter crashes into a nearby hotel

Johnny: Thats our cue to get the fuck outta here!

Shaundi: Wait.. we cant leave without the others *bullet whizzes right by* shit that almost hit me!

Johnny: Point Taken, you get birk, i'll go after him.

Johnny Gat walks through a hail of gunfire and over a trail of dead bodies to get to the bossman. Boss we gotta go!

Bossman: We cant leave without the vault.

Johnny: If we dont leave now they're gunna kill us or worse, throw us in jail. Even i know that this is too much for us to handle.

Bossman: Alright alright.. we'll try this again when it's not so overcrowded.

Johnny and Bossman make a dash back towards the spot he was before

Johnny: This dosen't feel right.. where the hell are the others!? oh.. shit.

Before johnny knew it, he was already surrounded by three teams of pissed off swat.

SWAT: They're gonna fry you for real this time asshole.

The SWAT walks out of the bank with the saints in handcuffs

Bossman: Is all this really neccesary?

Bossman is thrown into the back of a squad car and sees in the corner of his eye, the cheif of police troy bradshaw talking to the press.

one minute later

The police are leaving with the saints in custody, just when phillipe loren's limosuine is pulling up.

Phillipe: Follow them.
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3 years ago  ::  Aug 01, 2011 - 8:42AM #5
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michael_bimbo]kool


than wrote:

kool[/quote]
thanks mike

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3 years ago  ::  Aug 01, 2011 - 9:42AM #6
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 This is super great luke, but how come you didnt continue it after the bigger picture. I never know what story to add of your to add to my great reads list because you got so many spin-offs of your stories lol!
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3 years ago  ::  Aug 01, 2011 - 10:08AM #7
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Breaking Benjamin is set a day after the bigger picture

TBP was kinda short so im gonna try and make BB last a couple pages longer before moving on to the third shory. All these stories are like puzzle pieces that will only fit together after all of them have been told.

I hope you will find them worthy enough to join the rest of the best in your great reads thread.

honestly though, i dont get why you still comment on these stories, i havent been showing you or the others the same courtesy.

Its not because i dont care, i havent had much time to check the board lately, but now that ive free, im about to check whats new with stilwater stories.

thanks again WB, your efforts should not go un-rewarded.
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3 years ago  ::  Aug 02, 2011 - 10:57AM #8
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 of course buddy, I know you and some other guys cant pop by and have time to read everyones story. Most of the time I dont feel like reading other peoples stories, but I go back another day and read it, its the least I can do. 



I cant wait for more of this story though!
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