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"A brighter future, and a better life."
3 years ago  ::  Jun 28 2011 - 2:55AM
UltorDude
Posts: 2

 After the saints took Ultor down and kicked them out of stillwater the ultor corp grew and became twice as powerfull as before as this happen a Huge brake through in tecnolgy accured. Starship where created and new guns where made. Ultor with this tec destroyed the saints and moved to Mars. as people started to move there in flocks because of ultors promis of A brighter future, and a better life. The climent was so harsh it was hard to work and a plage started killing many workers. A grupe of rebbels called the red faction fought agaist them. Red faction won and started a free mars. at this time the earth defence force or E.D.F started taraforming mars but started taking controll of it. ultor had one seceret that will almost desrtoy mars later on.

3 years ago  ::  Jun 28 2011 - 2:56AM
UltorDude
Posts: 2

Quote by Ultor
 After the saints took Ultor down and kicked them out of stillwater the ultor corp grew and became twice as powerfull as before as this happen a Huge brake through in tecnolgy accured. Starship where created and new guns where made. Ultor with this tec destroyed the saints and moved to Mars. as people started to move there in flocks because of ultors promis of A brighter future, and a better life. The climent was so harsh it was hard to work and a plage started killing many workers. A grupe of rebbels called the red faction fought agaist them. Red faction won and started a free mars. at this time the earth defence force or E.D.F started taraforming mars but started taking controll of it. ultor had one seceret that will almost desrtoy mars later on.

3 years ago  ::  Jun 28 2011 - 4:29AM
Shadow-Knight
Posts: 3504

Most thrilling story I've ever read. Ever.

Someone give this guy an award for this outstanding story. The emotion and character depth was riveting and the plot was so well done.

5/5, sir.

3 years ago  ::  Jun 29 2011 - 7:34PM
Komatoze
Posts: 68

Quote by Shadow-Knight
Most thrilling story I've ever read. Ever. Someone give this guy an award for this outstanding story. The emotion and character depth was riveting and the plot was so well done. 5/5, sir.







LLAL! But seriously, the idea is good but it most definitely needs work. I'd read it if it was written better.

3 years ago  ::  Jun 30 2011 - 7:57AM
OGluke
Posts: 12448

is this an ultor story or a red faction story

its a good start

3 years ago  ::  Jun 30 2011 - 4:51PM
Amaris
Posts: 1197

@OGluke: Probably both, The Ultor in SR and in RF is the same company, just 100 something years later. :p 

3 years ago  ::  Jun 30 2011 - 8:27PM
OGluke
Posts: 12448

Quote by Amaris
@OGluke: Probably both, The Ultor in SR and in RF is the same company, just 100 something years later. :p 

oh okay then

i would love to know how they get to be so powerful

this story could explain that