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3 years ago ::
Oct 11, 2010 - 7:00AM
#11
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Nice first chapter! We always need new writers on here! You used alot of words i forgot about like: Bellowing & Uttered.
I'm really liking it.
Thanks for the Welcome to the Thread :) and I'm glad your liking the story ! 
Working on the next part tonight , It will get a lot more interesting as the story unfolds and you will start to see where I'm going with it.
Providing these forums with a touch of Ayngel-ness
Since : September 16th 2008 to 2011
If you ever need me I'm over on my Forum:http://srveterans.createaforum.com/index.php
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3 years ago ::
Oct 11, 2010 - 12:43PM
#12
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Ok added a little more to the story 
Providing these forums with a touch of Ayngel-ness
Since : September 16th 2008 to 2011
If you ever need me I'm over on my Forum:http://srveterans.createaforum.com/index.php
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2 years ago ::
Jun 09, 2011 - 2:29PM
#13
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I would like to extend my warmest welcome to a new Writer. Welcome, if you get offended by racism, sexism or stuff like that do not read my stories.
JUST A WARNING
Ayngel, that was an nice start, to what will be a great story.
Also we should thank you, you brought Deadly back so he mighty start writing again.
@J last time you were here, we were talking about Motorbikes
p.s. My stories arn't as bad as I made them sound.
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3 years ago ::
Oct 21, 2010 - 11:16AM
#14
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Stories are just stories bro... I just hopped in to support Ayngel with her new venture. I have to say she is showing some natural ability. Good stuff ay? Come on Ayngel, keep up the good work 
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3 years ago ::
Oct 21, 2010 - 5:08PM
#15
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This story made my want to write again.
Thank you Ayngel :) And this story will turn out very good.Keep writing
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2 years ago ::
Jun 08, 2011 - 11:55AM
#16
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The long awaited first chapter is finished ... sorry it took so long :( Working on chapter two
Providing these forums with a touch of Ayngel-ness
Since : September 16th 2008 to 2011
If you ever need me I'm over on my Forum:http://srveterans.createaforum.com/index.php
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2 years ago ::
Jun 08, 2011 - 12:59PM
#17
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Great job Ayngel! :D I love it, I can't wait to see where this leads to. :D
Check out Shaundi's Side in the Steelport Stories section, you'll love it!
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2 years ago ::
Jun 09, 2011 - 10:51AM
#18
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This is bad ass Ayngel. Keep up the great work and ignore that noob.
I HAS A BUCKET!
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2 years ago ::
Jun 10, 2011 - 8:12AM
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Just read that little extra, I like how you added that bit, it maks the chapter make a bit more sense and sem better. Next chapter please
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2 years ago ::
Jun 10, 2011 - 9:45AM
#20
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Cool, are you picking up this story again, I cant wait for the next chapter!
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