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Whats left of the Vice Kings
4 years ago  ::  Jan 26 2010 - 3:11PM
Posts: 50 Joined: Sep 17, 2011

"Look guys the Saints %?#$*@ us up pretty bad..but after the two years of them bein gone we have found new members. Currently we are in hiding until we have a force big enough to take back Stilwater from whats left of Ultor and the Saints. We have heard our Previous leader Benjamin King is coming back to Stilwater. Our job is to make his welcome home party present being the heads of the Saints..." *Cocks a UZI* "So lets get this **#% started eh?" *Cheering of about 150 gang members is heard*

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6 years ago  ::  Nov 2 2008 - 1:29PM
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good.

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6 years ago  ::  Nov 2 2008 - 5:11PM
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Stillwater is spelt 'Stilwater'

Anyway, its looks good but I want to see if you can make it good once its properly started.

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6 years ago  ::  Nov 2 2008 - 8:24PM
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i like it. its got me hooed and its only had like 4 lines

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6 years ago  ::  Nov 2 2008 - 10:22PM
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Quote by Siir Psycho
Stillwater is spelt 'Stilwater'

Anyway, its looks good but I want to see if you can make it good once its properly started.

Sorry bout that D:

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6 years ago  ::  Nov 2 2008 - 10:56PM
Posts: 50 Joined: Sep 17, 2011

The speaker and Temp-Leader steps off the podium. He thinks to himself "Cant wait to put a bullet in the Saints leaders head." He walks out of the old underground market that has been cleared out leaving only empty space. He walks to his car and sees about 7 other cars with Vice King members in it ready to raid some Saint bitches. He sits in shotgun of one car and goes half way out the window and yells to the others "We goin after a new Saints Stronghold that used to belong to the Brotherhood! I hear they still got some of their prototype cars int here lets move out!" He says going back int he car and getting an AK-47 out of the backseat and leaving he RPG for later. "Lets go!" He told the driver as the cars revved their engines and drove off to the stronghold. 30 minutes later

A Saints member stood on the corner with his pal smoking. All of a sudden they hear cars coming their way and he looks and sees 14 lights driving up and he shields his eyes and then sees the colors of the cars and the symbols. The cigarette dropped out of his mouth and he said "It cant be...Holy *?$#! Shawn its the Vice Kings!" He reached for his Glock but one of the cars stopped in front of them and pulled out and UZI and he said "Were back...bitches." As he pulled the trigger and the two Saints members were filled with bullets. The car then continued. In about 5 minutes all he cars made it to the front of the stronghold. The Temp-Leader also known as Rick got out of his car and looked and saw about 10 Saints patrolling the area. He aimed his AK-47 and pulled the trigger and the bullet flew true and went right through a Saints Skull. The rest of the Saints quickly were confused and then saw the Vice Kings. The Vice Kings quickly opened fire and the Saints and they went down quickly. They quickly sprinted for the large garage. They bused down the doors and finished off the men inside. Rick passed a corner and saw a man in the corner and he recognized him. Rick said "Donnie?". The man looked up and saw Rick. "*#$@ man you roll with the saints now? You really cant stay with one gang for long can you?" He chuckled. "Come on man you with us now!" Donnie slowly got up and grinned "So Vice kings are back up?" More Vice Kings came. The next day the Stronghold was fully under control and had Vice Kings guarding it now. They captured 3 trucks with mounted MG's and one prototype car with nitrous. This was the Vice Kings first victory. He hoped they would have more.

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5 years ago  ::  Feb 21 2009 - 4:20PM
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well done carnage cool story :D

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5 years ago  ::  Feb 21 2009 - 4:31PM
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Very Nice Story Can't Wait For More

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5 years ago  ::  Feb 23 2009 - 1:54AM
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Great story,continue.

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5 years ago  ::  Feb 23 2009 - 1:49PM
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Quote by purplebullets
well done carnage cool story :D

Quote by IX KiNgPiN IX
Very Nice Story Can't Wait For More

Quote by Jervisser
Great story,continue.

Look its a good story, but you guys, there obviosly isnt gonna be a next part for a while (or even never) the topic was from november and you 3 just bumped it up by sayin them comments, if you leave a story as long as from november to near the start of march, it looks very slim chance of a next part,
there really was no point in putting new posts on this thread!
Although it is a good story

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