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5 years Il y a ::
Oct 23, 2008 - 3:38PM
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I like it
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5 years Il y a ::
Oct 23, 2008 - 3:39PM
#12
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EDIT:
2 Weeks after The Encounter With Chris Maero keeps His Brotherhood, and Orders them to Take back the Territory they lost..meanwhile Chris his GirlFriend Jennifer Waits, And the saints, Are Working on a plan to Destroy the sons of samedi.. When Maero and his Brotherhood Break Into Chris's Home in Southern Cross. And Start Opening fire..Before the saints can Return fire. They Throw Smoke Grenades And Burst Into the House...When the smoke Cleared There Were no saints To Be Found...All Maero And his Brotherhood Could See was a Cell Phone Ringing...As Maero Answers this is what you hear...
Chris: I Let You live you son of a bitch!!
Maero: That Was Your Mistake...Not Mine..
Chris: Oh Yeah?
Maero: Why Don't We Have A Rematch?
Chris: Im Afraid That option Isn't Available at this moment...
Right as Chris Finishes his Sentence Saints Fill The Home And opened fire on The Brotherhood. Maero Escapes Out the back door leaving his brotherhood to die..And went on his search To find Chris...Maero Make a phone call to Dane Vogel to ask a favor...
Dane: What is it Mr Maero?
Maero; I want You and Your Men to Find The Leader Of The saints...and when you find him...Don't you dare kill him..or i'll kill you..Understand?
Dane: Yes Maero...No Problem..
Maero: Good...Now i'll talk to you later..* Hangs up the Phone *
Chris: Very Good Dane...* With a gun to Danes Head *
Dane: How did you get passed my security?
Chris: You mean your Puss Guards?
Dane: Yes...
Chris: Let me worry about that one Dane...Now..I Wanna talk about that deal we had.....
TO BE CONTINED??
If You want the forgotten saints(The untold story) To continue..
Post: Continue..
If You DON'T want the forgotten saints(The untold story) to continue
Post: You SUCK!! QUIT WITH THIS FUCKIN' STORY!!!
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5 years Il y a ::
Oct 23, 2008 - 4:54PM
#13
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continue its awesome
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5 years Il y a ::
Oct 23, 2008 - 5:13PM
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Alright.
Chapter 7:
As Chris And Dane Vogel Talked it over...They Came to a bitter Agreement....
Chris: That my final Offer...Accept it or I put a bullet in yo Head...
Dane: Than it's settled than my friend...Ultor will help you take over the Brotherhood, in exchange For The old Church...When The Brotherhood Is gone....
Chris: When Their Gone..I will leave you alone...
Dane: Good..Now Leave.
As Chris Leaves Dane Calls Maero telling him that Chris Was just in his office heading for the Cemetery In the Suburbs District to go to His Friends Funeral, Unknown To Chris. Danes Betrays him. Knowing that Chris will be unarmed at the Cemetery. Maero Gathers His Brotherhood And heads For the Cemetery....
Chris: I couldn't save you man...But you were able to save me..Thanx...But I let him go man...Im sorry...
Saint: Boss. The Brotherhood were Spotted Heading to this cemetery...What do you wanna do?
Chris: That Motherfucker...
Saint: Who?
Chris: Dane Vogel...
When Chris Finishes His Sentence The Brotherhood Surrounded the Cemetery. With No Escape and No entrance.....
With Chris Unarmed..And Very Little Saints to protect him. Will he survive?
Be Patient!! Im working on it now..
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5 years Il y a ::
Oct 23, 2008 - 5:54PM
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As The Saints try to get to their Leader...The Brotherhood Shoot Them Before they get a chance to pull out their Guns...And Maero Enters The Cemetery Searching for the Saints leader...But he is no where to be found...Maero Looks In The Coffin..and finds The Saint that he shot. When He had Chris pinned to the ground about to kill him...
Maero: So thats Your friend?....Come on out chris...you can't Hide Forever....Fine than...when we find you...There won't be a piece on flesh on your body.....Still won't reveal yourself?.....Fine....we'll blow this Whole Fucking Cemetery up...
Chris: Not before I do motherfucker...* Holding a C4 Detonator *
Maero: You don't have the guts To blow up this cemetery...
Chris: You underestimate me Bitch... * Pushes The Button *
Maero: Hahahaha looks like it doesn't work....
Chris: look Behind you....
When maero turns around He doesn't see anything but his gang Killing Saints...than Chris Puts a Samurai Sword Through Maero's Stomach..Maero furious and Having a Sword Sticking through His Stomach..Maero Pulls out his vice nine And pulls the trigger...
Chris: It looks like your out of ammo Maero....* Pulls out his Uzi *
Maero: Im not through Yet...
Maero Runs For his Truck. And Takes off. Chris Shooting his truck Busts Maeros right Back tire and His tail light. As The Brotherhood Surround Chris.. his girlfriend Jennifer Pulls up in Chris's car full of Saints And they unload on the Brotherhood...
Chris: I love you
Jennifer: I know you do......
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5 years Il y a ::
Oct 23, 2008 - 6:21PM
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continue please
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5 years Il y a ::
Oct 24, 2008 - 12:48AM
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Jeniffer and The Saints, wierd.
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5 years Il y a ::
Oct 24, 2008 - 6:49AM
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it's very good so please continue
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5 years Il y a ::
Oct 24, 2008 - 4:33PM
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Chapter 9:
After Chris's Encounter with maero and the brotherhood at the cemetery. Chris and Jennifer find a new Home in Sunsinger, But The Brotherhood was now the least of Chris's Worrys...Ultor and the sons of samedi were now after him..And a new gang named the Ronin were stepping up to the scene. With the saints being small and no allys...Chris Trys again to get the saints some allys with the ronin.....
Shogo:How did you find me?
Chris: I Have my ways..Now im gonna cut the small talk..With Ultor, Samedi and the brotherhood in stilwater...and Having a very small gang...Your gonna need my help shogo..
Shogo: Really?...or are you just wanting to take advantage of Of my Ronin?
Chris: If i was here to take your gang...There'd be a bullet in your head right now...
Shogo: I guess we might be able to work a deal...We'll help you...For 80% Of Stilwater..
Chris: Don't get too Greedy shogo...I'll offer you 50% No more...No less
Shogo: How about 65%?
Chris: 50!! Or you won't be shit kid...
Shogo: I'll think about it...
Chris: How long will that be?
Shogo: A day.
Chris: Fuck you say?..Alright...A Day is all you get kid...you better make the right choice...
Shogo: Oh i will...Now leave me...i have some thinking to do...
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5 years Il y a ::
Oct 25, 2008 - 11:25AM
#20
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Nice installment their, hoping he does ally with Shogo as he would be a great person to betray the Saints.
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