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Ricky's Initiation to the Gang Life
3 years ago  ::  Jan 26, 2010 - 1:07PM #1
ZzBioFirezZ
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Note: This is my first attempt at a Fanfiction. Tell me if it's good. More chapters to come.

Chapter 1: Ricky's Initiation to the Gang Life

Ricky was a 13 year old boy who was cocky and strong. He has a very short temper. He just moved in the neighborhood, so one day he decided to go outside and chill a little bit. He was outside his house, but then he saw a group of people wearing purple clothing. He got closer to see who are those people. As he got closer, one of the gang members spotted him. They started pointing and talking about him. Ricky didn't know what they were talking about, so he didn't care.

Gang Member #1: Hey! You little kid.

Ricky: I ain't no little kid!

Gang Memeber #1: Who you yelling at? I'll kill your little a--!

Ricky: Yeah, whatever.

The gang member pulled out a pistol and aimed at Ricky and was about to pull the trigger.

Gang Member #2: Yo! Chill out!

The gang member stopped and put his pistol in his pants.

Gang Member #1: Your lucky, you almost got blasted.

Ricky: Like I said, whatever.

Gang Leader: Ayo! You want to be in my crew.

Ricky: It's whatever.

Gang Leader: Iight, but first you got to get jumped in.

Ricky: Thats alright, I'll beat up all of you punk a----.

Gang Leader: You sure about that! Wreck this kid.

They all jumped him for 2 minutes and stopped. They busted Ricky's lip and nose. He had blood all over his shirt.

Gang Leader: Ayo! You iight!

Ricky: Yeah, I'm good.

Gang Leader: Iight then, peace!

Ricky: Peace!

The group of people left and Ricky just went to his house to relax!
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5 years ago  ::  Oct 21, 2008 - 9:55AM #2
Saint2500
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Weird
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5 years ago  ::  Oct 21, 2008 - 12:26PM #3
ZzBioFirezZ
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What was weird about this?
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5 years ago  ::  Oct 22, 2008 - 12:43PM #4
Wetbizket
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It all happend way to quick, and its kinda weird that a gang would want a 13 year old to join a gang,"is he going to do drivebys on his bike?!!!
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5 years ago  ::  Oct 22, 2008 - 9:14PM #5
T.Lucky
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well ive seen 14 year olds drive trucks in are hood
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5 years ago  ::  Oct 22, 2008 - 9:17PM #6
T.Lucky
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just a suggestion you should make him age while being in the gang and kind of go through each detail like he said you kinda just skipped through like all the details
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