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Ultor's Last Stand--Story Complete - By Psycho
4 years ago  ::  Jan 26, 2010 - 12:53PM #1
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Psycho's Story, based on Saints Row 2

Ultor's Last Stand

What already happened?: Dex is still alive but missing, after Ryan (Main Character) destroyed the Samedis's, they had a little chat and Ryan decided to let Dex go. Carlos is Troy's half brother and Will is back with the Saints. Troy and Julius are still alive, every gang is defeated and Ultor are near enough finished. You didnt kill Donnie

Characters:

- Main Character - Name: Ryan 'Psycho'
- Johnny Gat 'Gat'
- Will
- Tobias 'Toby'
- Carlos
- Julius 'Jules'
- Troy

Current Location: Ryan and the rest of the Saints have just succesfully stormed Ultor's HQ...

Story Start, Enjoy:

Carlos: Remember what I said about my brother...

Ryan: Yes yes. Will, keeps these boys under control and dont let Ultor past!

Will: Yes, of course, Carlos and Toby, spread out along this balcony. Dont worry, they arnt getting past us no matter what!

Johnny: Its not about them getting past, me and Ryan just think its best they dont come our way, ive dropped enough Ultor tonight, anymore would be taking the piss.

Will: Ha ha, right, gotcha'.

Ryan: *Cheeky smile*, we better get moving Gat.

Johnny: Follow on Ryan

Few minutes later...

*Ryan and Johnny exit elevator*

Johnny: Wouldnt fancy the elevator breaking, huh?

Ryan: I guess...

*Awkward silence*

Johnny: Um, so,... nervous about facing Troy?

Ryan: A bit, the guy that got me killed that night and tried to send yo' ass to the chair, atleast hes going to get whats always been coming to him...

Johnny: Im going to rip his fucking head off!

Ryan: *Rolls eyes* Yes, I thought you might.

Ryan: Ite', heres the door, you ready for this?

Johnny: Yes, of course! Lets do this, were the Saints baby!

Ryan: Fuck yeah, c'mon, here we go.. 3.. 2.. 1..

Scene change: From inside the office Ryan and Johnny are about to storm.

Troy: What the fuck you mean we have no control, how can the Saints over run Ultor?

Julius: I got a feeling somethings bad coming our way, have we got a fix on the Saints?

Dane: Yes we have, there all down stairs, but theres a few I dont know were they are though.

Julius: And whos that?

Dane: Um, Johnny and Ryan...

Julius: Youve got to be fucking kiding me!

Troy: Ryan and Johnny!? Ahhh for fucks sake, were in deep shit now!

*Loud bang*

Dane: Whats that?

Troy: It better be my fucking coffee, if its no.. oh shit!

Johnny: Ite, hows it going, havnt seen you in a long time, Troy! *Pulls out a shottie*

Ryan: Oh look Gat, good ol' Jules has showed up. Why you here? To watch a downfull of such a huge city figure, bit like that time you watched me get blown to fuck!

Julius: C'mon, it wasnt like that, I did i..

Johnny: Dont make fucking excuses, its over!

Ryan: Why you so quiet Troy?

Troy: Your not mad at me are you? I havnt done nothing.

Johnny: *Hits Troy - Troy lands on his back* Fuck you, how about getting Ryan blown up and trying to get rid off me, now thats something bitch!

Troy: Your under arrest, stand down, my Ultor boys will be here soon to bust your ass!

Johnny: Change the tune Troy, your really boring me! *Pulls psychotic face*

Julius: How about we give you some money, and you will be on your way, yeah?

Ryan: *Grabs Julius by the throat and pins up against post* Ha ha, money? I dont want your fucking money fool. Thats all your are, innit' Jules, money, but whats money at the end of the day?

Julius: Im the one who made you rich, dont try that one!

Ryan: *Pistol whips Julius across face, then punches him in the stomach - Julius falls the ground, holding his stomach*

Troy: Fuck that, come here you piece of shit.. ARGH!

Johnny: *Grabs Troy and holds in police lock against wall* Dont move, dont want me to hurt you now!

Ryan: Your fucking pathetic, if you'd stayed with me you'd have everything right now. The jobs, the women, the money, the rides. But I agree, thats no enough!

Julius: And what have I got? C'mon, just leave me now yeah?

Ryan: You didnt hear me, I said it wasnt enough. I want you DEAD! *Aims gun at Julius' face*

Julius: Now just wait a minute, please, hear me out!

Ryan: Alright, speak.

Johnny: Oi, Ryan?

Ryan: Dont worry Gat...

Julius: I gave you everything, money and the power. Then I fucked up, I didnt want to kill you that night, but Troy insisted I should *In the backround: Troy: Fuck you, this is nothing to do with me! Johnny: What did I say about talking!?* I admit, I fucked up, please dont kill me. If it wernt for me, you'd died on that street corner.

Ryan: If it wernt for you I wouldnt have been in a god damn coma!

Julius: Well I guess thats makes us even.

Ryan: *Shoots Julius straight in the face* Not really...

Troy: No, what have you done!?

Ryan: Ive done, what need to be done.

Troy: This isnt good. *Troy peers at desk*

Johnny: Why do you keep looking at that desk, Ryan, see if theres something there...

Troy: Theres no need for that, c'mon, lets talk.. uh.

Ryan: Wait, whats this? *Ryan grabs something and pulls it out* Oh look, theres Dane

Johnny: I was beginning to wonder were he was

Dane: Fuck you Troy, this is your fault!

Troy: Why didnt you call Ultor, like we said incase of a situation like this!?

Dane: Because you fucking left the radio on the table over there!

Troy: Oh fuck!

Ryan: Ive had enough of this, Johnny, do what you do best!

Johnny: Hooray! *Pushes Troy up against window and grabs shottie - Troy punches Johnny* What the fuck! *Johnny punches back - Troy lands up against window* Bye Troy, nice knowing you!

Troy: Your fucked, your a dea... *Johnny shoots - Troy's lifeless body falls out the window*

Ryan: So, Dane, what made you team with Troy and Julius?

Dane: Troy was a respected officier, he offered to form an organisation to help clean up Stilwater. He said he had another guy to help us, that was Julius. I met them under the bridge one night.

Ryan: The night I went knocking on deaths door!

Dane: Unfortuatly, yes!

Johnny: You know whats good for you Dane? A nice sky dive!

Ryan: Agreed *Ryan drags Dane to window*

Dane: *Holds onto window frame* Woah, thats a long way down, this isnt how I planned to go, please leave me.

Ryan: Fuck you! *Pushes Dane out the window*

Dane: Arhhhh...

Johnny: Done and done!

Ryan: All finished!

Johnny: You know Ryan, I couldnt of done this without you, your a legend!

Ryan: No you sir, are the legend!

Johnny and Ryan: Haa ha, WERE THE SAINTS BITCH! Ha haaa...

*Carlos, Will and Tobias burst in*

Will: We cant hold them out much longer, there coming up!

Johnny: Shit, we better get ready!

Ryan: Will, get near the door *Throws Will a Uzi* Johnny, stay near Will. Me and Toby will get behind this table, so when they arrive, we will shoot the fuck out of them!

Tobias: Sounds good to me!

Johnny: Carlos, come over here, hey, whats wrong.. oh..

Carlos: What the fuck you done with my brother? Youve killed him havnt you, you piece of shit! TROY, WERE ARE YOU, PLEASE ANSWER ME!

Ryan: He betrayed me, he got what was coming to him!

Carlos: I told you not to, why would you? Your going to pay motherfucker! *Carlos points AK-47 at Ryan*

Ryan: Oh shit...

TO BE CONTINUED

Hope you all enjoyed the first part of my Ultor's last stand story!

Thanks for reading

- Siir Psycho

Ultor's Last Stand - Part Two/Teaser

*Carlos points AK-47 at Ryan*

Ryan: Oh shit...

Carlos: Yeah thats right, oh shit!

Johnny: Ite, all this fighting is going to our heads, lets all chill.

Carlos: Yeah, you'd love that hey Gat. If I was to put my gun down, I know what you'd do.

Johnny: Look, I know how you feel, c'mon me and you are really close!

Carlos: Trust me, you dont know how I feel.

*Ryan still standing there, hoping Carlos wont shoot*

Johnny: See, the same thing happened with my sister, Lin.

Carlos: You never mentioned that..

Johnny: I couldnt, and the worst part, Troy knew and he didnt tell me. Just so he'd keep me around to help take over Stilwater for him, then he could get rid off me.

Ryan: I would have said Gat, but what with the Carnales and the VKs, and that boat incident didnt help much either.

Johnny: I know Ryan, dont worry yourself.

Carlos: No one asked you Ryan!

Johnny: It was me that killed Troy, not Ryan, shoot me if you have too. But that motherfucker never told me about my sister just so I could do his dirty work.

Carlos: Thats different, im his brother!

Johnny: Are you now? A brother, what a good brother. Would a brother send all those cops like he did to me and you when we were busting that Brotherhood stronghold. All he cared about was himself, thats a fact.

Carlos: Your right, he may be my brother, but you guys have been loyal to me. Sorry.

Ryan: *Ryan rushes over* Dont be sorry, its ok...

Carlos: *Pushes Ryan to one side* Im getting out of here, see you around!

Johnny: We need you Carlos, Ultor are coming, please dont leave.. please?.. for fuck sack! *Kicks chair over*

Ryan: I feel bad on Carlos, but theres no way Troy was going to get away alive.

Johnny: Dont worry, we need to get out of here.

Ryan: Got an escape plan?

Toby: Yeah, I found a Ultor pass card on Mr Dane Vogel's coat, I placed it up on that desk.

Johnny: I'll get it, im closer.. it isnt here?

Ryan: Please say your joking!?

Will: Why do we need Dane's card anyway?

Toby: Its our only ticket out of here, Dane has his own elevator. So if we had it, we could get out of here no problem.

Ryan: Yeah, what he said!

Johnny: Wait a minute, Carlos must have it!

Toby: How would he know what it does?

Johnny: Its fairly obvious, he must have taken the elevator down.

Will: No way!

Ryan: Think about it, what you think Carlos has just walked past all them Ultor goons like nothing happened.

Will: Good point

Toby: What the fuck are we going to do then?

*BOOOM!*

Will: What was that?

Johnny: I guess thats Ultor's little way of telling us to get the fuck outta' here!

Ryan: Everyone, stack up on ammo, now!

Will: Johnny, got any plans, on how were getting out of here?

Johnny: Hmm.., Ryan?

Ryan: Looks like theres only one option, were gonna' have to charge Ultor head on.

Johnny: My kind of plan!

*Voice from door: Surrender, your surrounded! - 2 Ultor Heli's appear at window*

Ryan: *Ryan stairs at door - Johnny loads shotgun* Ok, lets go...

Ultor's Last Stand - Part Two

Ryan: Ok, lets go...

Will: *Whispers* Were going out this room?, there could be hundreds of them from here to the bottom!

Toby: I make it thousands...

Johnny: What you want to do? Climb down the building like Spider-man?

Ryan: Um, we better get moving...

Johnny, Toby & Will: Why?

Ryan: Look out that window...

Toby: Holy shit, Torpedo!

Will: That shit has rockets and machine guns!

Johnny: Is it me, or is that thing about to fire?

*Voice from door: Youve left us no choice, were coming in!*

Ryan: Here they come...

*BOOM! - Ultor storm room*

Johnny: Open fire bitches!

Ryan: *Runs and slides behind overturned desk - Pops head up and takes out plenty of Ultor boys*

Ryan: You wanna' fuck with us? Your fucking with the best!

Will: *Oppersite side of room to Ryan - Hides behind post* Toby, get here now!

Johnny: Fuck this! *Grabs an Ultor Goon and uses as human shield*

Ultor Goon: Stop firing on that dude! *Whispers* Steve, go round the back of that guy!

Ultor/Steve: *Whispers in Ultor Goon's ear while bullets are flying about everywhere* You mean Johnny Gat?

Ultor Goon: Yes, now hurry!

Ultor/Steve: Im on it! *Steve moves off*

Johnny: Ryan, keep firing on these motherfuckers!

Ryan: *Runs out - Punches a Ultor Goon - Grabs his shotie in one hand, Ak-47 in the other hand* Come then? Dont be scared!

Will: Ready Toby? Go!

Toby & Will: *Both pop out and spray the Ultor Goons behind the huge overturned desk*

Toby: MOTHERFUCKERS!

Johnny: *Johnny shoots an Ultor Goon who tries to run off* Die bitch!

Ryan: Nice shooting, is there any more in here?

Toby: Dont look like it...

Will: Now thats why im the baddest pimp in Stilwater!

Ryan: Damn, that line never gets old..... *Ryan looks at Johnny* Oi Gat, get down!

Johnny: *Johnny falls down - His human shield gets shot in the back*

Ryan: *Ryan sprays Ultor/Steve* That was a close call!

Ultor/Steve: *Lays bleeding on floor* Hey Johnny, your a dead man, a special someone will be arriving shortly!

Johnny: You mean the Torpedos? There already here, and im not fucking scared!

Ultor/Steve: Ha ha, alot worst...

Ryan: I hope that was a joke

Johnny: Dont worry, anyway, thanks Ryan, (Interupted)

Will: Ok, that Torpedo is going fire we better get moving, like NOW!

Ryan: Lets move!

*Few minutes later after walking down stairs with caution...*]

Toby: This is proberly it, if we storm this room, we will be able to get down stairs.

Will: Lets go!

*Scene: A big room - Theres plenty of cover around the edge of the room - Open clearing in the centre - Elevator in the middle of the room - Big windows on the left and right of the room*

Johnny: Ok, Will and Tobias, you burst in and head right. Get behind cover. Me and Ryan here will go threw the door and get behind the cover dead infront.

Ryan: Yeah, we will cover you, we just need to get to that Elevator!

Will: Im ready, lets go Toby.. 1.. 2.. 3..

Toby: Ahhhh motherfucking Ultor fuckers!

Johnny: Cover them!

Ryan: *Shoots Ultor Goon who tries to get behind Toby and Will*

Johnny: *Turns around to see Ultor Goon about to grab him - Johnny knees him in the balls - Pulls armored hat off and punches in face* Ha ha *Shoots in face with shottie at close range*

Ultor Goon #1: We need to hold these Saints back so our boy can arrive

Ultor Goon #2: Where is he?

Ultor Goon #1: He approaching fast.

Ultor Goon #2: Damn, these guys have never seen Mr Lee Vogel. Also, ive heard hes in his beloved Torpedo, you know the one thats near in destrucable!

Ultor Goon #1: Thats right, these motherfuckers wont know whats hit em'!

*A few more minutes of intense fighting - Will shooting anyone who tries to get behind there cover - Toby shooting Ultor Goons at lond range, helping Ryan & Gat - Gat shotgun any dude who approaches - Ryan shoots Ultor Goons across the room*

Will: Toby, theres another Torpedo approacing, looks different from the rest. Like more bulky!

Toby: *Shoots Ultor Goon - Ultor Goon tries to hop over but Toby stabs in the eye* Ok, dont care Will, we need to stay focused!

Ultor Goon #1: Ha ha, here he comes, Mr Lee Vogel!

Ryan: There over-running us! Johnny, back to back!

Ryan & Johnny: *Stand up back to back, shooting loads of Ultor Goons*

Johnny: Fuck this! *Pulls out grenade - Pull pin and throws over near multiply Ultor Goons*

Ryan: Johnny, NO!

Will: Did Johnny just throw a Gren..

*BOOM!*

Will: Uh no!

*Side of building collapses, leaving one side of Ultors HQ bare*

Ryan: FUCKING HELL! If this building goes down!

Johnny: Them motherfuckers shouldnt have got that close!

Will: C'mon Toby, lets get near Johnny and Ryan!

Ryan: Looks like Ultor have back up abit, an.. oh shit! Torpedo!

*Torpedo flies really low threw room and smashes threw the window on the other side - Comes back threw and faces Ryan, Johnny, Will and Toby*

Lee: Hey, um, im about to kill you all!

Johnny: *Walks out* Fuck that, we'll bring you down!

Lee: Ha ha, Goodluck 3rd Street motherfuckers!

Ryan: *Looks round to see Torpedo facing them and Ultor boys all behind cover waiting to stike* This is going to be one hell of a fight!

Ultor's Last Stand - Part 3

Ryan: This is going to be one hell of a fight!

Lee: Damn right, goodnight Saints!

Johnny: Everyone, spread out!

Ryan: *Slides for cover* Will and Toby, Ultor Goons heading up the stairs, I want you to hold them off, GO!

Will: But what about.. *Interrupdted*

Ryan: Dont worry, now move!

Toby: Lets go Will!

Ryan: *Shouts* Hey Johnny, what we going to do?

*Lee swopes down, trying to take Ryan's head off - Ryan & Johnny crouch*

Johnny: I havnt got a clue, we will just blow this bird out the sky!

Ryan: *Shoots at Lee as he flies above again* Die motherfucker!

Lee: *Shoots missiles at building*

*BOOM!*

Johnny: Oh shit, this place is going to collapse!

Ryan: Keep firing!

Johnny: *Runs round side, looking for weapons*

Ryan: Damn, this building really is gonna' go!

Lee: *Flies above and stops* Hey Ryan, this building is looking pretty weak bitch!

Ryan: *Runs and jumps for the Torpedo.. but misses* FUCK!

Lee: Swoops off, turns around, and fires another missile at building*

*Ultor's HQ's walls are slowly peeling off*

*Torpedo swoops in again...*

Ryan: Die bitch! *Shoots AK-47 but gun turret on Torpedo hits Ryan, causing him to fly and land up against a wall*

Johnny: RYAN! How you alright?

Ryan: Yea.. yeah.. im good. Stay there Gat, dont get into the open space!

Johnny: Fuck that, the Torpedo's coming, the turret will rip you apart!

Ryan: Its not worth the risk... *coughs*

Johnny: *Grabs Ryan's leg, pulls to one side - Lee's Torpedo fires, bullets hit were Ryan was sitting*

Ryan: That was close! *Stands up, stumbles over* C'mon Johnny, we can do this, me and you, unbeatable.

Johnny: Of course, lemme' see if I can find anything!

Ryan: *Runs of, dodging incoming Torpedo bullets*

Lee: Ive had enough, this building is coming down. So long Ryan!

*Torpedo swoops by one last time*

Ryan: *Runs and dives.. grabs onto frame of Torpedo* Johnny, give me something!

Johnny: Oh shit, *Grabs satchel charges* Catch it Ryan!

Ryan: *Catches in right hand* Ha ha, time to die Lee! *Plants Satchel* Shit, how am I going to get back, I cant jump off in mid air!...
*Climbs up, knocks on Lee's window* Hello Lee boy!

Lee: Holy fuck, how'd you get there!? *Swires Torpedo around, gets closer to building - Lee tries to smash side of Torpedo to kill Ryan*

Ryan: Oh shit, swings onto other bar and grabs onto the wings!

Johnny: JUMP!

Ryan: *Leaps and grabs onto ledge* Help me up Johnny!

Johnny: *Pulls Ryan up* Did you plant the bombs?

Ryan: Oh yes, of course!

Johnny: *Waves at Lee*.. *Ryan detonates*

Lee: Haa, whats going on, oh fuck, im going down, them Saint motherfuckers, oh shit... *Silent*

Ryan: *Lays down* Phew, finally!

Johnny: No time for laying down, we gotta' move!

Ryan: Your right! *Phones Will:

Ryan: Where are you?

Will: Downstairs, why?

Ryan: Were coming down Will

Will: No, its infested with Ultor down here, dont bother. (Toby, get that guy there!) Ryan, fall back!

Ryan: Fall back were!?

Will: Anywhere! (Toby, your ment to cover the right side, ahh there everywhere!) Ryan, trust me, just go, NOW! *Will puts down phone*

Ryan: Shit, Will and Toby are in deep shit, were going down to the ground floor.

Johnny: *Grabs lifeless Ultor body* lets roll.

*Minutes later...*

Ryan: Doors about to open, get ready Gat.

Johnny: Trust me, im ready!

*Elevator stops - Hear gun shots and screaming - 'Ting!'*

Ryan: Here we go... charge!

*Ultor Goons shoot at Ryan and Johnny as they scramble for cover*

Will: I told you not to come!

Johnny: Were not leaving you guys to die.

Ryan: *Three Ultor Goons jump Ryan - Ryan grabs one and throws into the other - grabs the other one and throws him into Will's AS14 Hammer's bullet path - Ultor Goon stands up, Ryan dogdes his punch and kicks him down - Ryan grabs is 44. Shepherd and shoots the Goons*

Ryan: We really need to fall back, lets go!

*Dodge firing bullets, they all get behind cover!*

Ryan: Oh shit, there all over me! *Ryan knocked to ground*

Johnny: Leave my boy along cocksucker! *Fires shotgun - runs at Ultor*

Ryan: Johnny NO!

Johnny: Your not good enough for me, are y.. ARGH! *Shot in arm*

Ryan: *Runs out of cover and pulls Johnny aside!*

Toby: Were dead men, DEAD!.. Oh shit, Johnny's been hit!

Will: Is he ok?

Johnny: Ahhh, im OW, Im fine!.. arhhh..

Will: There over-running us Ryan, we need to get back more!

Ryan: Where too?

*Two SUV aproaches behind*

Johnny: Ah, whos this?.. ow!

*Dex, Benjamin King, Carlos and Donnie exit SUV*

Benjamin: Donnie, fetch Will and that other guy, you follow Carlos!

Johnny: Thank god your here.. ah fuck.. we need a ride o.. ow.. out of here now!

Ryan: You guys go here just in time!

Benjamin: *Shoots oncoming Ultor Goons* You ready to move?

Johnny: Yes, the sooner the better.. ahh damn my arms hurting bad

Banjamin: Right, c'mon everyone!

*They all run, load up in the SUVs*

Ultor Goon: There getting away, get the last of the Torpedo's, and the BEAR, its time to finish this shit!

Ultor's Last Stand - Part 4

Ultor Goon: There getting away, get the last of the Torpedo's, and the BEAR, its time to finish this shit!

Ryan: Lets go everyone!

Will: Ryan, get Johnny in, me and Toby will cover you!

Ryan: Gotcha', lets go Johnny. *Helps up into back of SUV* You good?

Johnny: Yes im good, I just want my AK!

Ryan: *Gives Johnny AK-47*

Dex: *Looks out window* Ryan, what you waiting for, get in motherfucker?

Ryan: Coming, Will and Toby, lets move!

Will: Take that Ultor motherfuckers, im the baddest Pimp ever!

*BEAR comes charging in*

Toby: Oh shit.. *BEAR crushes Toby up against wall* Ohhh shit,...

Donnie: Damn, what motherfucker invented that thing!

Will: Oh shit, Tobias!

Johnny: For the love of god, just get in, forget Toby, hes gone!

Will: Damn! Im coming! *Shot in back* Argh, fuck.

Ryan: Whys this happening? *Looks out window at Johnny*

Johnny: Lets move!

Ryan: Roll on!

*Car 1: Donnie: Driver - Dex: Front passenger seat - Ryan: Back seat
Car 2: Carlos: Driver - Benjamin King: Front passenger seat - Johnny Gat: Back seat*

Ryan: Nice to have you back Dex!

Dex: Thanks, oh and Donnie came along.

Donnie: Hey!

Ryan: How comes your here?

Donnie: Ive always respected the Saints, im doing this for Lin.

Ryan: Oh I see.. *Ultor car smashes into side of car* Ok, less chit chat, more shooting!

*At the same time..*

Johnny: Thanks for coming back Carlos

Carlos: *Nods head*

Benjamin: Why? Were you scared you wernt going to make it out big boy?

Johnny: Your still a cocky son of a bitch.

Carlos: Lets just focus here before we talk about old days!

*Ryan looks behind, see Ultor HQ collapsing*

Ryan: Holy shit, there goes Ultor.

*News Report:

Studio: Where taking you to the live scenes were a huge war has broken out.

(At the scene in Helicopter) Crissie: Hey. As you can see Ultor and the Saints have started what seems to be a full scale war. Bullets and explosions light the night as Ultor are make there last and desperate stand.

Studio: What else is there?

Crissie: Well there.. oh (beep) Ultor HQ has just collapsed. Theres two black SUV's fleeing the scene with a long trail of Ultor following them. The Saints themselves are also making a move, getting close to the scene.

Studio: Thanks for the info, we will keep you posted as this scene evolves.

*Back to normal...*

*SUVs drive up next to eachother*

Ryan: You handle the Torpedo, ive got the BEAR!

Johnny: Ok, goodluck!

*BEAR smashes SUV*

Ryan: Oh shit, we cant take damage like that! *Shoots out window with shotgun*

Dex: Donnie, get closer!

Donnie: Im trying, im trying.

Dex: Go for the tires!

Ryan: Shoots out on tire. *BEAR looses slight control*

Johnny: This Torpedo is getting on my fucking nerves!

Ryan: We cant destroy that, but it can easily crush us. We need to somehow destroy it.

Dex: Theres some rope here, Johnny has the Satchel's, so we tie the BEAR and the Torpedo together and BOOM!

Donnie: Nice thinking, but hard.

*Theres a ramp approaching*

Ryan: *Shouts across to other SUV* Oi Gat, catch this!

Johnny: *Catches rope* Ive got it!

*BEAR crushes Car 1 up wall. Ryan: Oh shit, were going to get squashed!

*Torpedo fires missile in front of Car 2, building site collapses behind both cars*

Johnny: Damn, this is like some motherfucking action movie!.. Carlos, up the ramp, it will get us level with the Heli.

*SUV head for ramp*

Johnny: Hit it!.. Wahoo! *Throws Satchel and rope onto Torpedo* Sucker!

Ryan: Ive got to hook this BEAR!

Donnie: Try the bars on the front window screen. *Speeds up*

Ryan: Just a little steady, got it. *Ryans throws rope around bar*

Johnny: I take it your ready?

Ryan: That shits going down, blow it up Gat!

Johnny: *Pushes button, Helicopter explodes* Ha ha bitch! *BEAR falls back and sets on fire*

Ryan: Heres the rest of our boys! *Saints rush in, taking the fight over.

Dex: Woah, that was crazy!

Ryan: Pull up Donnie, no ones following

*Both SUVs stop and everyone gets out*

Ryan: Phew, that was tough.

Johnny: We did good back there!

Donnie: Nice driving Carlos *Shake hands*

Dex: You think the Saints can handle Ultor?

Benjamin: Yeah of course, Ryan?

Ryan: Oh yeah, there tough guys.

*Bomb explodes, surprise attack*

Ryan: *Cough* What the? *Sees SUV upside down in flames* What the fuck was that? *cough* Dust everywhere! *See Johnny on floor, fighting Ultor Goons*

Johnny: Help!

Ryan: *Crawls for Uzi - Starts shooting Ultor Goons*

Benjamin: The Saints are coming back to help!

Ultor Goon: Destroy the Saints, they simply cant live any longer!

Ryan: Oh shit, I still cant get up! *Looks round to see Johnny laying down, shooting Ultor*

Ultor Goon stands over Johnny, puts AS14 Hammer to his head*

Ryan: Johnny! *Uzi runs out of bullets - Desperatly crawls for shotgun*...

*BOOM!*

Johnny: Woah, that was close!

Ryan: Oh, thank god.

Carlos: Uh oh, Rocket Launcher!

Johnny: Are for fuck sack, does this shit end?

Benjamin: Everyone down, brace for impact!

Ryan: Were screwed... *Closes eyes*

*Gun shot*

Ryan: Are we dead?

Dex: Meet the ol' McManus!

Ryan: Thanks Dex!

Johnny: *Looks over at Dex, lays back down in relief* Thank god we had that sniper

Donnie: That was so intense fighting.

*Everyone slowly gets up...*

Johnny: Weve won, the streets are ours, we have won!

*Everyone cheers*

Ryan: The Saints own Stilwater once again!

Dex: Just like they should be!

Carlos: And always will be.

Donnie: Well done, you deserve it.

Benjamin: Yeah, what he said.

Ryan: Thanks.

Johnny: How about you two roll with us from now on?

Ryan: Im cool with that.

Benjamin: Um..., er, yeah why not!

Donnie: Im down for that, as long as theres a few cars for me!

Johnny: Ha ha, theres a burnt out BEAR overthere, take that.

Donnie: You think so?

Ryan: Yeah, remove the dead Ultor bodies and fix it up. It would make a great gang vechile.

Donnie: I'll fix that up no problem.

Ryan: Ill phone our boys to pick it up!

Donnie: Thanks.

Ryan: One sec, *Pulls out phone*

Donnie: That chase reminded me when I chased down some Carnales, me and Sharp burnt those bitches!

Johnny: This remides me of that time we went for Tanya, eh Ben!

Benjamin: I guess your right yeah.

Johnny: Whats wrong?

Benjamin: Its Julius, hes dead, its hard to believe. *Looks down*

Dex: I know what you mean, he did deserve it though.

Johnny: He had to die, along with Troy, Dane, Brotherhood, Samedi, Ronin's, hell even the Vice Kings.

Benjamin: Yeah I guess, I dont have any respect for him anymore. He never used to be like that, I remember growing up in Sunnyvale Gardens, I gave him his first NR4, talking about it, thats when we met up with Vincent Price to buy coke, your uncle Donnie.

Donnie: Ahh really, I miss him. *Eyes water* I cant blame Ryan for killing him, he fucked with Lin, I would have done the same. Its just a droped stitch I guess.

Johnny: This gang shit does get strange sometimes...

Benjamin: He even saved me once...

Donnie: *Slightly confused face* Who did?

Benjamin: Julius did, a bunch of Carnales punks try to take his cig. I think, yeah I pushed one and they came at me with knieves, Julius shot those motherfuckers without seconds thought. Thats what I mean, it used to be so good, then he turned into a betraying snitch. *Face softens*

Johnny: Money, its gets to peoples head.

Dex: And power. Look at Troy for example. Gave up on all of us, so he could be Chief of Police. I know he was undercover anyway but he could have spared us.

Carlos: Even made Troy turn on his own brother! What a fool, *tear falls from his eyes*

Donnie: Yeah, like Sharp had to kill Lin, why couldnt he have spared her?

Johnny: Arrh, no shutup please. *Face softens, eyes water*

Carlos: Why did Troy have to betray his own brother? He was my big brother, he used to look after me when our Mom was too busy getting the money for us to eat. We grew up hard, on the streets, I guess thats what made him a good undercover detective. I remember when we went on our first vacation, we ended up in a fight, outnumbered, but we won. He said that me and him would stick together no matter what!... *Silence* Oh well, I dont care! *Eyes water even more*

*Everyone looks down, tears dropping*

Ryan: The BEAR's ready to be colle.. woah, am I interrupting something?

Johnny: *Wipes eyes* Anyway, whos up for some Freckle Bitches?

Ryan: Yeah alright then, Ben? Dex? Carlos? Donnie?

Benjamin & Dex: Yeah why not!

Carlos: I could do with some Bazooms.

Donnie: No, not me, im waiting for this truck. Ill see you at the, where are we based?

Johnny: We have quite a few places, dont we Ryan. I say we meet at our Apartment, it has a stripper pole!

Ryan: No, I got a much better place, lets meet at the Church.

The End

By 'Siir Psycho'.

Hope you all enjoyed my story, im pleased with it myself. There will be more work from me in the fruture, ive got a few ideas running around my brain.

Honours to 'BlueSpurt'. I used an element from his story, in Benjamin's sad talk about Julius. Honours to yoyopop10, I used his elements also in Bejamin's sad talk about Julius. Thanks guys!

Thanks to OGluke and Deadpool for the back up! ;) You guys are legends!

Thanks for reading, Siir Psycho

PS: Im open for ideas!



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6 years ago  ::  Aug 13, 2008 - 5:21PM #2
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"Siir Psycho"]Psycho's Story, based on Saints Row 2

Ultor's Last Stand

What already happened?: Dex is still alive but missing, after Ryan (Main Character) destroyed the Samedis's, they had a little chat and Ryan decided to let Dex go. Carlos is Troy's half brother and Will is back with the Saints. Troy and Julius are still alive, every gang is defeated and Ultor are near enough finished.

Characters:

- Main Character - Name: Ryan 'Psycho'
- Johnny Gat 'Gat'
- Will
- Tobias 'Toby'
- Carlos
- Julius 'Jules'
- Troy

Current Location: Ryan and the rest of the Saints have just succesfully stormed Ultor's HQ...

Story Start, Enjoy:

Carlos: Remember what I said about my brother...

Ryan: Yes yes. Will, keeps these boys under control and dont let Ultor past!

Will: Yes, of course, Carlos and Toby, spread out along this balcony. Dont worry, they arnt getting past us no matter what!

Johnny: Its not about them getting past, me and Ryan just think its best they dont come our way, ive dropped enough Ultor tonight, anymore would be taking the piss.

Will: Ha ha, right, gotcha'.

Ryan: *Cheeky smile*, we better get moving Gat.

Johnny: Follow on Ryan

Few minutes later...

*Ryan and Johnny exit elevator*

Johnny: Wouldnt fancy the elevator breaking, huh?

Ryan: I guess...

*Awkward silence*

Johnny: Um, so,... nervous about facing Troy?

Ryan: A bit, the guy that got me killed that night and tried to send yo' ass to the chair, atleast hes going to get whats always been coming to him...

Johnny: Im going to rip his fucking head off!

Ryan: *Rolls eyes* Yes, I thought you might.

Ryan: Ite', heres the door, you ready for this?

Johnny: Yes, of course! Lets do this, were the Saints baby!

Ryan: Fuck yeah, c'mon, here we go.. 3.. 2.. 1..

Scene change: From inside the office Ryan and Johnny are about to storm.

Troy: What the fuck you mean we have no control, how can the Saints over run Ultor?

Julius: I got a feeling somethings bad coming our way, have we got a fix on the Saints?

Dane: Yes we have, there all down stairs, but theres a few I dont know were they are though.

Julius: And whos that?

Dane: Um, Johnny and Ryan...

Julius: Youve got to be fucking kiding me!

Troy: Ryan and Johnny!? Ahhh for fucks sake, were in deep shit now!

*Loud bang*

Dane: Whats that?

Troy: It better be my fucking coffee, if its no.. oh shit!

Johnny: Ite, hows it going, havnt seen you in a long time, Troy! *Pulls out a shottie*

Ryan: Oh look Gat, good ol' Jules has showed up. Why you here? To watch a downfull of such a huge city figure, bit like that time you watched me get blown to fuck!

Julius: C'mon, it wasnt like that, I did i..

Johnny: Dont make fucking excuses, its over!

Ryan: Why you so quiet Troy?

Troy: Your not mad at me are you? I havnt done nothing.

Johnny: *Hits Troy - Troy lands on his back* Fuck you, how about getting Ryan blown up and trying to get rid off me, now thats something bitch!

Troy: Your under arrest, stand down, my Ultor boys will be here soon to bust your ass!

Johnny: Change the tune Troy, your really boring me! *Pulls psychotic face*

Julius: How about we give you some money, and you will be on your way, yeah?

Ryan: *Grabs Julius by the throat and pins up against post* Ha ha, money? I dont want your fucking money fool. Thats all your are, innit' Jules, money, but whats money at the end of the day?

Julius: Im the one who made you rich, dont try that one!

Ryan: *Pistol whips Julius across face, then punches him in the stomach - Julius falls the ground, holding his stomach*

Troy: Fuck that, come here you piece of shit.. ARGH!

Johnny: *Grabs Troy and holds in police lock against wall* Dont move, dont want me to hurt you now!

Ryan: Your fucking pathetic, if you'd stayed with me you'd have everything right now. The jobs, the women, the money, the rides. But I agree, thats no enough!

Julius: And what have I got? C'mon, just leave me now yeah?

Ryan: You didnt hear me, I said it wasnt enough. I want you DEAD! *Aims gun at Julius' face*

Julius: Now just wait a minute, please, hear me out!

Ryan: Alright, speak.

Johnny: Oi, Ryan?

Ryan: Dont worry Gat...

Julius: I gave you everything, money and the power. Then I fucked up, I didnt want to kill you that night, but Troy insisted I should *In the backround: Troy: Fuck you, this is nothing to do with me! Johnny: What did I say about talking!?* I admit, I fucked up, please dont kill me. If it wernt for me, you'd died on that street corner.

Ryan: If it wernt for you I wouldnt have been in a god damn coma!

Julius: Well I guess thats makes us even.

Ryan: *Shoots Julius straight in the face* Not really...

Troy: No, what have you done!?

Ryan: Ive done, what need to be done.

Troy: This isnt good. *Troy peers at desk*

Johnny: Why do you keep looking at that desk, Ryan, see if theres something there...

Troy: Theres no need for that, c'mon, lets talk.. uh.

Ryan: Wait, whats this? *Ryan grabs something and pulls it out* Oh look, theres Dane

Johnny: I was beginning to wonder were he was

Dane: Fuck you Troy, this is your fault!

Troy: Why didnt you call Ultor, like we said incase of a situation like this!?

Dane: Because you fucking left the radio on the table over there!

Troy: Oh fuck!

Ryan: Ive had enough of this, Johnny, do what you do best!

Johnny: Hooray! *Pushes Troy up against window and grabs shottie - Troy punches Johnny* What the fuck! *Johnny punches back - Troy lands up against window* Bye Troy, nice knowing you!

Troy: Your fucked, your a dea... *Johnny shoots - Troy's lifeless body falls out the window*

Ryan: So, Dane, what made you team with Troy and Julius?

Dane: Troy was a respected officier, he offered to form an organisation to help clean up Stilwater. He said he had another guy to help us, that was Julius. I met them under the bridge one night.

Ryan: The night I went knocking on deaths door!

Dane: Unfortuatly, yes!

Johnny: You know whats good for you Dane? A nice sky dive!

Ryan: Agreed *Ryan drags Dane to window*

Dane: *Holds onto window frame* Woah, thats a long way down, this isnt how I planned to go, please leave me.

Ryan: Fuck you! *Pushes Dane out the window*

Dane: Arhhhh...

Johnny: Done and done!

Ryan: All finished!

Johnny: You know Ryan, I couldnt of done this without you, your a legend!

Ryan: No you sir, are the legend!

Johnny and Ryan: Haa ha, WERE THE SAINTS BITCH! Ha haaa...

*Carlos, Will and Tobias burst in*

Will: We cant hold them out much longer, there coming up!

Johnny: Shit, we better get ready!

Ryan: Will, get near the door *Throws Will a Uzi* Johnny, stay near Will. Me and Toby will get behind this table, so when they arrive, we will shoot the fuck out of them!

Tobias: Sounds good to me!

Johnny: Carlos, come over here, hey, whats wrong.. oh..

Carlos: What the fuck you done with my brother? Youve killed him havnt you, you piece of shit! TROY, WERE ARE YOU, PLEASE ANSWER ME!

Ryan: He betrayed me, he got what was coming to him!

Carlos: I told you not to, why would you? Your going to pay motherfucker! *Carlos point AK-47 at Ryan*

Ryan: Oh shit...

TO BE CONTINUED

Hope you all enjoyed the first part of my Ultor's last stand story!

Thanks for reading

- Siir Psycho


Ah man, coolstory!

I like the title.. Ultors last stand, that sounds dominating.. You be dominating psycho, keep it up.. and looking foward with eyes attached to the screen for the nex wrote:

Psycho's Story, based on Saints Row 2

Ultor's Last Stand

What already happened?: Dex is still alive but missing, after Ryan (Main Character) destroyed the Samedis's, they had a little chat and Ryan decided to let Dex go. Carlos is Troy's half brother and Will is back with the Saints. Troy and Julius are still alive, every gang is defeated and Ultor are near enough finished.

Characters:

- Main Character - Name: Ryan 'Psycho'
- Johnny Gat 'Gat'
- Will
- Tobias 'Toby'
- Carlos
- Julius 'Jules'
- Troy

Current Location: Ryan and the rest of the Saints have just succesfully stormed Ultor's HQ...

Story Start, Enjoy:

Carlos: Remember what I said about my brother...

Ryan: Yes yes. Will, keeps these boys under control and dont let Ultor past!

Will: Yes, of course, Carlos and Toby, spread out along this balcony. Dont worry, they arnt getting past us no matter what!

Johnny: Its not about them getting past, me and Ryan just think its best they dont come our way, ive dropped enough Ultor tonight, anymore would be taking the piss.

Will: Ha ha, right, gotcha'.

Ryan: *Cheeky smile*, we better get moving Gat.

Johnny: Follow on Ryan

Few minutes later...

*Ryan and Johnny exit elevator*

Johnny: Wouldnt fancy the elevator breaking, huh?

Ryan: I guess...

*Awkward silence*

Johnny: Um, so,... nervous about facing Troy?

Ryan: A bit, the guy that got me killed that night and tried to send yo' ass to the chair, atleast hes going to get whats always been coming to him...

Johnny: Im going to rip his fucking head off!

Ryan: *Rolls eyes* Yes, I thought you might.

Ryan: Ite', heres the door, you ready for this?

Johnny: Yes, of course! Lets do this, were the Saints baby!

Ryan: Fuck yeah, c'mon, here we go.. 3.. 2.. 1..

Scene change: From inside the office Ryan and Johnny are about to storm.

Troy: What the fuck you mean we have no control, how can the Saints over run Ultor?

Julius: I got a feeling somethings bad coming our way, have we got a fix on the Saints?

Dane: Yes we have, there all down stairs, but theres a few I dont know were they are though.

Julius: And whos that?

Dane: Um, Johnny and Ryan...

Julius: Youve got to be fucking kiding me!

Troy: Ryan and Johnny!? Ahhh for fucks sake, were in deep shit now!

*Loud bang*

Dane: Whats that?

Troy: It better be my fucking coffee, if its no.. oh shit!

Johnny: Ite, hows it going, havnt seen you in a long time, Troy! *Pulls out a shottie*

Ryan: Oh look Gat, good ol' Jules has showed up. Why you here? To watch a downfull of such a huge city figure, bit like that time you watched me get blown to fuck!

Julius: C'mon, it wasnt like that, I did i..

Johnny: Dont make fucking excuses, its over!

Ryan: Why you so quiet Troy?

Troy: Your not mad at me are you? I havnt done nothing.

Johnny: *Hits Troy - Troy lands on his back* Fuck you, how about getting Ryan blown up and trying to get rid off me, now thats something bitch!

Troy: Your under arrest, stand down, my Ultor boys will be here soon to bust your ass!

Johnny: Change the tune Troy, your really boring me! *Pulls psychotic face*

Julius: How about we give you some money, and you will be on your way, yeah?

Ryan: *Grabs Julius by the throat and pins up against post* Ha ha, money? I dont want your fucking money fool. Thats all your are, innit' Jules, money, but whats money at the end of the day?

Julius: Im the one who made you rich, dont try that one!

Ryan: *Pistol whips Julius across face, then punches him in the stomach - Julius falls the ground, holding his stomach*

Troy: Fuck that, come here you piece of shit.. ARGH!

Johnny: *Grabs Troy and holds in police lock against wall* Dont move, dont want me to hurt you now!

Ryan: Your fucking pathetic, if you'd stayed with me you'd have everything right now. The jobs, the women, the money, the rides. But I agree, thats no enough!

Julius: And what have I got? C'mon, just leave me now yeah?

Ryan: You didnt hear me, I said it wasnt enough. I want you DEAD! *Aims gun at Julius' face*

Julius: Now just wait a minute, please, hear me out!

Ryan: Alright, speak.

Johnny: Oi, Ryan?

Ryan: Dont worry Gat...

Julius: I gave you everything, money and the power. Then I fucked up, I didnt want to kill you that night, but Troy insisted I should *In the backround: Troy: Fuck you, this is nothing to do with me! Johnny: What did I say about talking!?* I admit, I fucked up, please dont kill me. If it wernt for me, you'd died on that street corner.

Ryan: If it wernt for you I wouldnt have been in a god damn coma!

Julius: Well I guess thats makes us even.

Ryan: *Shoots Julius straight in the face* Not really...

Troy: No, what have you done!?

Ryan: Ive done, what need to be done.

Troy: This isnt good. *Troy peers at desk*

Johnny: Why do you keep looking at that desk, Ryan, see if theres something there...

Troy: Theres no need for that, c'mon, lets talk.. uh.

Ryan: Wait, whats this? *Ryan grabs something and pulls it out* Oh look, theres Dane

Johnny: I was beginning to wonder were he was

Dane: Fuck you Troy, this is your fault!

Troy: Why didnt you call Ultor, like we said incase of a situation like this!?

Dane: Because you fucking left the radio on the table over there!

Troy: Oh fuck!

Ryan: Ive had enough of this, Johnny, do what you do best!

Johnny: Hooray! *Pushes Troy up against window and grabs shottie - Troy punches Johnny* What the fuck! *Johnny punches back - Troy lands up against window* Bye Troy, nice knowing you!

Troy: Your fucked, your a dea... *Johnny shoots - Troy's lifeless body falls out the window*

Ryan: So, Dane, what made you team with Troy and Julius?

Dane: Troy was a respected officier, he offered to form an organisation to help clean up Stilwater. He said he had another guy to help us, that was Julius. I met them under the bridge one night.

Ryan: The night I went knocking on deaths door!

Dane: Unfortuatly, yes!

Johnny: You know whats good for you Dane? A nice sky dive!

Ryan: Agreed *Ryan drags Dane to window*

Dane: *Holds onto window frame* Woah, thats a long way down, this isnt how I planned to go, please leave me.

Ryan: Fuck you! *Pushes Dane out the window*

Dane: Arhhhh...

Johnny: Done and done!

Ryan: All finished!

Johnny: You know Ryan, I couldnt of done this without you, your a legend!

Ryan: No you sir, are the legend!

Johnny and Ryan: Haa ha, WERE THE SAINTS BITCH! Ha haaa...

*Carlos, Will and Tobias burst in*

Will: We cant hold them out much longer, there coming up!

Johnny: Shit, we better get ready!

Ryan: Will, get near the door *Throws Will a Uzi* Johnny, stay near Will. Me and Toby will get behind this table, so when they arrive, we will shoot the fuck out of them!

Tobias: Sounds good to me!

Johnny: Carlos, come over here, hey, whats wrong.. oh..

Carlos: What the fuck you done with my brother? Youve killed him havnt you, you piece of shit! TROY, WERE ARE YOU, PLEASE ANSWER ME!

Ryan: He betrayed me, he got what was coming to him!

Carlos: I told you not to, why would you? Your going to pay motherfucker! *Carlos point AK-47 at Ryan*

Ryan: Oh shit...

TO BE CONTINUED

Hope you all enjoyed the first part of my Ultor's last stand story!

Thanks for reading

- Siir Psycho[/quote]
Ah man, coolstory!

I like the title.. Ultors last stand, that sounds dominating.. You be dominating psycho, keep it up.. and looking foward with eyes attached to the screen for the next part.

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6 years ago  ::  Aug 13, 2008 - 5:30PM #3
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Thanks legendary Luke, next part coming tonight, if not then defently tomorrow. Ive got to write it out, I also like your story, very kick ass!
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6 years ago  ::  Aug 13, 2008 - 5:40PM #4
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If that was a movie, the part where they all go for the doors would be a great ending as Ultor came crashing through. :D That was really good, 4/5.
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6 years ago  ::  Aug 13, 2008 - 5:43PM #5
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"OGluke"]Ah man, coolstory!

I like the title.. Ultors last stand, that sounds dominating.. You be dominating psycho, keep it up.. and looking foward with eyes attached to the screen for the next part


my reaction is exactly li wrote:

Ah man, coolstory!

I like the title.. Ultors last stand, that sounds dominating.. You be dominating psycho, keep it up.. and looking foward with eyes attached to the screen for the next part[/quote]
my reaction is exactly like his^

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6 years ago  ::  Aug 13, 2008 - 6:11PM #6
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Better reactions than I thought I might have, thanks!
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6 years ago  ::  Aug 13, 2008 - 6:14PM #7
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"Siir Psycho"]Better reactions than I thought I might have, thanks!


You can only expect Greatness, when you are greatness.. wrote:

Better reactions than I thought I might have, thanks![/quote]
You can only expect Greatness, when you are greatness.. Psycho.

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6 years ago  ::  Aug 13, 2008 - 6:37PM #8
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Thanks Luke, Part two teaser in original post. Acual Part two will be tomorrow!

EDIT: Ive edited Carlos and Johnny's heart to heart speech a little, I forgot a small part! :lol:
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6 years ago  ::  Aug 13, 2008 - 6:43PM #9
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"Siir Psycho"]Thanks Luke, Part two teaser in original post. Acual Part two will be tomorrow!


You're most welcomed psycho, BTW is your real name ryan?

Ryan Pysycho, SuperSweet! name.

I'm to bummed to continue typing, my fingers are sore as a muthafoe.. i think it's time for Naps.

Looking 4ward, to part2!

I'd try, dreaming about it, but i'm already booked for the nite.. with 3 wetdreams, all dedicated to a special someone.. Cough HalleBerry.

i'm a sick bastard, i kn wrote:

Thanks Luke, Part two teaser in original post. Acual Part two will be tomorrow![/quote]
You're most welcomed psycho, BTW is your real name ryan?

Ryan Pysycho, SuperSweet! name.

I'm to bummed to continue typing, my fingers are sore as a muthafoe.. i think it's time for Naps.

Looking 4ward, to part2!

I'd try, dreaming about it, but i'm already booked for the nite.. with 3 wetdreams, all dedicated to a special someone.. Cough HalleBerry.

i'm a sick bastard, i know :( .

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6 years ago  ::  Aug 13, 2008 - 6:45PM #10
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Great story dude
keep it up :D
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